Wednesday, February 11, 2015

Analyzing "On Buying Local" by Katherine Spriggs

  • Spriggs' main point is that buying locally is better for the environment.
  • Her thesis is clearly stated at the end of the first paragraph, "we should give up a little bit of convenience in favor of buying local."
  • Some of the reasons she gives are: 
    • The US is a major contributor of green houses gas emissions as well as a guzzler of world oil supplies, to transport food goods across country.
    • Local farmers would not have to compete against large farms as much to survive.
    • Large farms use monoculture techniques that deplete earth of nutrients.
    • Small farms are more sustainable, using local and natural resources.
    • Buying locally can reduce fuel costs.
  • She uses quotes and statistics from a wide variety of sources.
  • Yes, her reasons are plausible and sufficient.
  • She does mention counter arguments, and uses facts to prove how they are flawed.
  • She acknowledges them but holds to her argument.
  • she presents the counter arguments respectfully
  • avoids sweeping generalizations.
  • She uses quotes from experts like the director of research and education at the Center for Global Food Issues, and uses statistics from not only credible, but varied sources.
  • Her sources are credible and unbiased.
  • Her essay was published in 2010 and all the sources are from 2006 or later, so they are current within the last ten years.
  • She does not assume that the reader knows a great deal about the topic and provide appropriate detail and background to make it accessible.
  • The language is fairly informal and generally inclusive.
  • This is a topic is one that I have studied fairly recently, and I have found that I do agree with all the point Spriggs has made.

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