- Spriggs' main point is that buying locally is better for the environment.
- Her thesis is clearly stated at the end of the first paragraph, "we should give up a little bit of convenience in favor of buying local."
- Some of the reasons she gives are:
- The US is a major contributor of green houses gas emissions as well as a guzzler of world oil supplies, to transport food goods across country.
- Local farmers would not have to compete against large farms as much to survive.
- Large farms use monoculture techniques that deplete earth of nutrients.
- Small farms are more sustainable, using local and natural resources.
- Buying locally can reduce fuel costs.
- She uses quotes and statistics from a wide variety of sources.
- Yes, her reasons are plausible and sufficient.
- She does mention counter arguments, and uses facts to prove how they are flawed.
- She acknowledges them but holds to her argument.
- she presents the counter arguments respectfully
- avoids sweeping generalizations.
- She uses quotes from experts like the director of research and education at the Center for Global Food Issues, and uses statistics from not only credible, but varied sources.
- Her sources are credible and unbiased.
- Her essay was published in 2010 and all the sources are from 2006 or later, so they are current within the last ten years.
- She does not assume that the reader knows a great deal about the topic and provide appropriate detail and background to make it accessible.
- The language is fairly informal and generally inclusive.
- This is a topic is one that I have studied fairly recently, and I have found that I do agree with all the point Spriggs has made.
Wednesday, February 11, 2015
Analyzing "On Buying Local" by Katherine Spriggs
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